Betray
why? — Chapter 1
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Hi everyone this is my very first gravitation fanfic so let me know what you think of it bad, good or crap or what i should do to improve the story. So on with the info.
Disclaimer: I do not own Gravitation or any characters in this story. They belong to Maki Murakami and the publisher Gentosha and Tokyopop
Summery: Shu-chan came back from work and found Ruichi in Yuki's bed while Yuki was on top of Ryu. And Shu. Confronts them.
"talking"
thinking
Ages for this story are
Shuichi Shondo-21
Ruichi Skama-34
Eiri Yuki-26
Masaki-23
Betray
Shuichi arrives back from talking with Touma. He places his key in the doorto unlock it and toes off his shoes.
"Yuuuuki, I'm home!"
When no one answers, he checks the kitchen, the study, the bathroom, and eventhe washer and dryer. A noise draws his attention to the bedroom. He stopsby the door and hears the sounds of moaning from within.
Opening the door slowly, he gets the shock of his life to see Yuki pumping inand out of Ruichi. Yuki turns his head to see Suichi's sad face before hedisappears.
Shuichi runs towards the front door, but Yuki grabs him by the arm before hegets there. Shuichi slaps him on the cheek.
"Yuki, if you ever loved me, then how the ** can you do this to me?" hecries.
"I never said I loved you," Yuki answers. "You were just a fling."
With those words, Shuichi runs from the apartment.
Instead of going to Hiro's apartment, becuse Hiro is in Kyoto with Ayaka so he goes to his other friend's place toget away. When he reaches Masaki, he is welcomed and offered a drink.
"Tea would be fine," he answers, and then begins to tell Masaki everythingthat has happened. "I'm just so tired of him treating me like a toy and notloving me like I love him."
Masaki takes in everything that Shuichi says. He hates to see him get hurtand finally comes up with a way to help.
"Shuichi, I think you should leave Japan and start fresh."
Shuichi thinks that is a good idea, but asks, "What about Touma? He willfind me."
"Then why don't you come to LA with me and my band?" Masaki asks. "We'llmake sure that Touma or anyone else will never find you."
Shuichi thinks about it and decides to go to LA to start over. So that rainynight, the Shuichi Shindo that everyone knew, left Japan for a new life.
this is the edted stroy Please review. let me know how it turns out and any ideals how I can make it better and I will be putting chap.2 up soon depends on my collage sechdule. Thanks for reading my story.
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