Reviews to "MS13: The Beginning"
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Review to MS13: The Beginning by NightingGale Hey X, It's me, NightingGale, you sure like the Lucky 13! Lol. I'm continuing ours, of course it won't be the same one, since we are not both writing it, but I think you might like it. I thought I would let you know. I'm going to post it... Continue reading
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Review to MS13: The Beginning by PunkNicole Thanks for the review. I have added a new chapter, just in case.. you know you wanna read it or what not. I did enjoy MS13, Nice quality ^-^
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Review to Chapter 1 "Phone call from "The Boss"" of MS13: The Beginning by Franklin Fan Forever The beginning of your story has me interested. Keep up the good work. Also... Thank you so much for your review of my fic, I fixed the format. I had no idea it looked like that.
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Review to MS13: The Beginning by Franklin Fan Forever I forgot to mention the character names in your fic are AWESOME!
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Review to Chapter 1 "Phone call from "The Boss"" of MS13: The Beginning by Franklin Fan Forever One word- Awesome
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Review to Chapter 1 "Phone call from "The Boss"" of MS13: The Beginning by J Alright.. for the 3rd chapter you can start off with Stray practicing his MX moves at a park for the upcoming rally for the best tricks and the fastest racer then Bonez can swing by and tell that Andre has a job for the 2 of them and Shadesz and... Continue reading
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Review to MS13: The Beginning by J lol its called a motorcross bike silly. and Stray is 6'4 and decently muscular build (basically he looks like me in guy form..but not as skinny and a little taller) but chapeter 3 is good whatchu talking about.oh and btw..you know me so well lol.... Continue reading
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Review to Chapter 1 "Phone call from "The Boss"" of MS13: The Beginning by J Nice. Are you going straight to the restauraunt where the gangs meet or are you going to go through the big ass drama scene with Skye's ex boyfriend, first bringing in Doc to patch her up and when Bonez puts on a blue wig... Continue reading
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