Reviews to "Chapter 1" of "A different kind of imprint"

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  • Review to Chapter 1 "Jared's" of A different kind of imprint by This is Ali
    W-O-W! That's some twist! I love it. Keep going.
  • Review to Chapter 1 "Jared's" of A different kind of imprint by Angie
    nice!!!! I like the detail!!
  • Review to Chapter 1 "Jared's" of A different kind of imprint by Angie
    nice!!!! I like the detail!!
  • Review to A different kind of imprint by Daciana
    OMG! TOTALLY did not see that one coming! That's amazing! I love the detail you used here!
  • Review to Chapter 1 "Jared's" of A different kind of imprint by Alicia_Sally
    First review dance!!!! I'm blunt and to the point I think your story chapters are way too short. You are leaving out details and I almost fell asleep in the first five seconds, which is how long it took me to read the whole thing btw. Seriously,... Continue reading
  • Review to A different kind of imprint by Spazz
    Very interesting idea, I love the twist. You did a good job but I didn't feel the connection with the character. I didn't feel sympathetic to his anger and heartbreak, etc. Tweak that and you're good. Anyways, nice job!
  • Review to A different kind of imprint by Aradana
    Okay, I guess. I didn't love it, and I got the feeling you were trying to replicate Meyer's style. (You are aware that you have the chapter "Jared's" twice, right?)