Reviews to "Jez's Tale"

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• Review to Chapter 1 "Chapter 1" of Jez's Tale by Skylar Song
  Keep writing. It's good. But isn't the main character 5? Her thoughts are just a bit more complicated than a 5 year olds. But seriously, keep writing, I like it :)
• Review to Chapter 1 "Chapter 1" of Jez's Tale by Ginny
  Do you think that maybe she should be a bit older? 7 or something like that? How tall are five year olds? And seven year olds?
• Review to Jez's Tale by Mikki
  Your stories are WONDERFUL!! But don't you think Jez should be a little older than 7 because it seems like Charlie weird for being with a 7 year old. But other than that its amazing!! It really touches your heart which is great! <3
• Review to Jez's Tale by Ginny
  Hmm...I've been thinking about rewriting all of it. It seems a bit to sudden, and it tells you everything in the first...2 paragraphs or something. It tells you straight away that Charlie is a werewolf and loads of other stuff that really should be... Continue reading
• Review to Jez's Tale by RyanReed
  I need to know what happens next. Could you find it in your heart to update? Pretty please? I love your writing style and the fact that you've got grammar. Plus, I can tell that when you say werewolves, you don't mean some corny teenage... Continue reading