Reviews to "Banished"

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  • Review to Chapter 1 "Banished" of Banished by SilverFang0722
    A very interesting story indeed. I do hope you update soon. Although the lines where this word, (sob), appears seems to be better off without it. You could just write before the sentence that she spoke the words in between sobs. You could also... Continue reading
  • Review to Banished by nm1716
    I like the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again soon.