Reviews to "Green Rubber Bands"

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  • Review to Chapter 1 "Green Rubber Bands" of Green Rubber Bands by SilverFang0722
    One thing, separate your story into paragraphs with spaces in between. It makes for a less intimidating look for your story. Not all people are as happy as me to just ignore that in order to read through the story. And, is this completed? I feel... Continue reading
  • Review to Green Rubber Bands by Joseph_Knight
    WALL OF TEXT! OM NOM NOM NOM NOM but in all seriousness, please break your stories into more paragraphs, i simply could not read this because it was too overwhelming. indentions help! trust me!
  • Review to Chapter 1 "Green Rubber Bands" of Green Rubber Bands by PunkNicole
    Awesome if i do say so myself.