Reviews to "FusionFall, Just FusionFall"

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  • Review to Chapter 1 "A Day In The Life -Mostly Ashley and Ben-" of FusionFall, Just FusionFall by Shade
    Not a bad start, you might want to introduce the characters a bit. I know who Ben and Dexter are, but I don't know the other two. Perhaps a brief physical description. I think the dialogue does a good job showing thier personalities though.