Reviews to "Yin and Yang"

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• Review to Yin and Yang by PehTeh
  Your stories are pretty choice too. I enjoyed them very much. I think a bit more flow between the chapters would be cool though, it feels a little bit disjointed but I encourage you to continue writing. Thanks for the review. Hee hee! To... Continue reading
• Review to Chapter 1 "chapter 1" of Yin and Yang by SilverFang0722
  Not to sound all pushy but the pacing is too slow. What happened to the girl with the Yin-Yang symbol? What is Akatsuki, Hebi, and Sasuke doing? Itachi? Although what I liked is that the general feel of this chapter gave Sai a sense of... Continue reading