Review to "Chapter 1" of "The Dubious Origins of Morgan Keele"
made by Olivie Potter-Malfoy
Hey. ^^ Well, I like it, but it's very cliched with the whole 'I'm moving to Hogwarts but I really don't want to go but then I see sexy Malfoy' sort of thing. This kinda thing is overdone, especially with OC characters. And if you're not careful, OC characters can slowly realm into Mary Sue zone - so make sure Morgan still stays normal. ^^ Good job, though.