Review to "Jez's Tale"

made by Ginny

Hmm...I've been thinking about rewriting all of it. It seems a bit to sudden, and it tells you everything in the first...2 paragraphs or something. It tells you straight away that Charlie is a werewolf and loads of other stuff that really should be a sort of... figure it out later kind of thing.... bleh I make no sense lol.

I'm going to make her a bit older. Maybe make Charlie a bit younger too, can't decide yet. I'll figure it out...