Review to "Chapter 1" of "A different kind of imprint"

made by Alicia_Sally

First review dance!!!! I'm blunt and to the point I think your story chapters are way too short. You are leaving out details and I almost fell asleep in the first five seconds, which is how long it took me to read the whole thing btw. Seriously, are you serious about writing. You aren't going to make with lack of skills and ability too hook the reader. JUST SAYING!